Saturday, April 9, 2011

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Remember to read the the Foward, Prologe, and Chapter 1 before this or nothing will really make since at first.

Broken Promises

Chapter 2




Nine Years Later

A strong wind blew Julia’s hair around her face.  The sounds of catsumys filled the morning air as she silently walked down the abandoned road.  She quickly shoved her rouge strains back up into her hat hiding them from view.

“This is a long way from heaven,” she thought as her eyes scanned her surrounding, “but I can live with that.”

Hitching her pack higher on her shoulder, she looked around to see if anyone had seen, but as before she was alone.  She huffed under her breath and started forward again.

Warm sunlight danced across her face when she finally stepped out from under the canopy of the forest.  A small village stood before her eyes.  Two tiny rivers wrapped around the peaceful scene connecting a few yards behind the village walls.

Its high wooden walls showed of battles long forgotten.  Scars dug deep into its mighty body, but it stood firm, unyielding to all.

She walked quickly up to the road that headed towards the sleepy town.  The only way she seemed to be able to enter was through a small arch way that was stationed by two armed guards.

Seeing her approach the guards moved away from the wall stopping her short.

“State your business,”  demanded one of the guards.

She looked both over and sighed in relief.  They were both humans, which was very odd because a demon would have been better qualified to protect the village than both  humans combined.

Taking a deep breath she answered in a low voice,  “I have come for food and rest.  I have traveled a great distance and would truly appreciate it if you would allow me safe passage.”

The guards fell silent and studied her for a moment.  She prayed that they had not noticed that she was a woman even with her faked deep voice.

She knew what happened to a woman who traveled alone and even with these guards, she did not want to take that chance.

She watched with great relief as the guards moved aside and waved her in.  She stepped forward, but before she was in the village the guard that had not spoken grabbed her arm.

She turned and looked up at him.  Her eyes were wide and her mouth was dry.

“Don’t cause any trouble, Lad.  Do you understand?”  asked the guard.

“Yes sir,”  she huffed in a deep voice.

“Good,”  growled the guard.

Releasing her roughly he shoved her through the gate.  She almost tripped over her own feet, but caught herself.  She turned and looked back at the gate and she had to repress the urge to stick out her tongue at that guard.

Rubbing her arm she scanned the village.  The streets were filled with buggies and carts packed to the brim with different fruits and vegetables.  People, all human, mobbed the streets rubbing elbow to elbow with each other.

She shivered at the thought of stepping foot into that mess, but she needed food and she needed it fast.

Scanning her surroundings one last time a small diner caught her eye.  It was small and a bit run down, but it would do.  Shoving her way through the crowd and almost losing her hat twice she finally reached the diner.

Taking a deep breath she pushed open the diner’s doors and stepped in.  The smell of stale smoke and liquor flew up her nostrils and tickled her brain.  She wanted to gag on the smell, but she forced the notion down.

Trying not to breathe through her nose, she walked into the diner.  It was poorly lit and only appeared to have to have two tables with no chairs, but the bar was as shiny as a new penny.

Other than herself only two people graced the diner with their presence.  One appeared to be the bartender and the other, a man, appeared to be a customer like herself.  The man sat with his back to her nursing a bottle of Jakin and the bartender only glanced up at her then continued to polish a spotless glass as if she was not there.

She huffed then made her way over to the bar.  Slinging her pack off her shoulder she sat it in the stool next to her then climbed onto her own stool.  It took a bit of effort due to the fact that the stool was so tall, but she finally made it up there all by her lonesome.

When she looked up the bartender was in front of her.  She jumped back a bit almost falling out of her chair before she corrected herself.

The bartender had a striking face and not in a good way.  He appeared to look more like a humanoid weasel then a man.  His bitty eyes were close together and his chin was long and pointed.  His nose was short and pig shaped. 

She had to force herself not to shiver as he looked her over.

“What do you what?”  the bartender asked in a high squeaky voice.

 She told him her order making sure to deepen her voice when she spoke then watched as he headed to the back room.

She looked over at the man beside her.  He did not even notice that she existed.  Shaking her head she looked down at her hands.

            “Dang, Father, you were right,” she thought to herself. “I was not missing anything.” 

“So are you new around here?”  asked the man.

His voice made her jump, but she kept her seat.

“Yes sir,”  she answered in a deep voice.

The man turned to face her.  He would have been quite handsome if he had bathed and trimmed his beard, but at that moment he just looked like an unkempt mountain man. 

The man looked her up and down once before he turned back to study his bottle.

“You’re overly pretty for a boy,”  the man reported.

“I look like my mother,”  she answered quickly.

The man looked up at her, one eyebrow raised.  She cursed herself when she realized that she had not deepened her voice, but the man said nothing, most likely to drunk to notice.

“You must watch your back,” the man hissed. “Men around here don’t care any if you’re a girl or a boy as long as you’re nice to look at.  But they are nothin’ compared to the demons that wander around these parts.” 

“Demons?” she asked making sure to deepen her voice this time. “You don’t mean all demons are like that, do you?” 

“Demons are evil, vindictive creatures that are more beast then man.”  the man muttered around his bottle.

She stared at the man for a moment not believing her ears.

“Does everyone on this village share your opinion?”  she asked carefully.

He took a sip before slamming his bottle roughly on the bar.  He turned to her, his eyes as blood shot as a demon in blood lust, and sneered at her.

“Yes, Lad!” the man snapped. “It has been this way since I was a child and it’ll be that way when I’m dead and buried in this cold, hard ground.  You just better stay away from those demons, Lad, if you want to live a long and healthy life.” 

She stared the man in the eye as if she looked away he would jump her, but he just turned away and sipped his Jakin.  As she quickly looking away, the man’s words pounding in her head.

“Father what can I do?”  she prayed. “ They have so much hate in them.  How do you expect them to love one another.  You may have given this assignment to the wrong daughter.”

“I chose you because of your heart, Julia.  None of your sisters have as much sympathy to both races as you do,”  a male voice whispered in her head.

“Father?”  she breathed.

“I am not asking you to change the entire world, but just to change one person,”  God continued.

“One is not a very big number,”  she muttered.

“No, but it is a start and all starts start out small,”  explained God.

“What do you want me to do now?”  she asked.

“Wait,” God whispered.


Seven Hours Later

Julia picked at the last remaining pieces of her food when the door of the diner slammed open.  Warm air gust in stirring the stale air making her look up.  The man beside her hissed out a liquored laced breath as the bartender stiffened before her.

“What do ya’ think you’re doin’ here, Demon?”  the man snarled.

She felt the man lumber out of his stool as she turned.  Her breath froze in her lungs when her eyes locked on the man behind her.

Two piercing green eyes shot straight through her, even though he had not looked at her.  Long, blood red hair hung loosely around an animalistic, yet ungodly handsome face.  His body was wide and large, but not overly so.

She watched as the demon drew a lung full of air through his nostrils.  They flared as his eyes snapped to her.  Her heart skipped a beat, but she did not allow him to see how his eye contact affected her.

“You better not be thinkin’ what I think you’re thinkin’, Demon!” growled the man. “You leave that Lad alone, you here.” 

The demon looked over at the man then back to her.  He took another breath, more slowly this time.

“Lad?”  the demon asked in a rough, gravely voice.

She watched in shock as a smile tugged at the side of his mouth, but never fully formed.  She was expecting him to tell her secret, but he said nothing.

“What do you want, Caspian?”  asked the bartender.

“Why so cold, Delaney?” the demon asked. “What have I done now?”  .

She watched as he started forward, so before he could look back at her she turned and looked back down at her empty plate.

“What’s wrong with me?  I have never been so shaken by a man before.  I am an angel!” she lectured to herself.  “I can destroy this world with a wave of my hand, but this man, this demon scares the very life out of me. Why does this man make me feel like a new born colt?  All shaky and unsteady on my feet.”


Caspian breathed in the female’s scent again.  The smell of vanilla and female musk filled his senses.  He wanted to grab her and rub her strange scent all over his body.

 He wanted it to soak into him so everyone knew that she was his and he was her’s.  The very thought scared him to death, but at the same time calmed him.

The female’s clothing left everything to the imagination, making her appear to be nothing more than a young boy.  If it had not been for her powerful scent he would have even been fooled by her ruse as the humans appeared to be.

Though the exact thing that drew him to her, also made him want to run and hide.  The female was not human, but at the same time, she was by all means not a demon either.  The female was something that he had never come across before and for some reason, she made him quite nervous.

“Caspian, we may have been friends when we were boys, but we are grown men now,” squeaked Delaney. “You know that it is looked down upon now that we know better.”

He looked at the one human that he thought he could always count on, the one man he called his friend, and snarled.

“You have no spine, my old friend,”  he snapped.

He watched as Delaney pulled back.  It took all his self control not to reach out and snatch Delaney over the bar and snap his weasel-like neck with his bare hands, but he could not.  He looked back at the female in front of him and froze.

His tiger did not want to show the female its rage; it did not want to scare her away.  It acted as if she was a skittish deer that would flee at any sudden movement.

He looked at the female’s back.  It was straight and stubborn, but he could see a slight shiver that ran up and down it.

Whispering so softly that a human ear could not pick up the vibrations he said,  “I know what you are.”

The female’s head whipped around.  Her eyes were wide filled with both fear and amazement.

“Who are you?”  the female whispered back.

He smiled then turned to the door.  He knew that she was going to run after him and his tiger purred in pleasure.  Without looking back he stepped out of the diner.


Julia watched as Caspian walked from the diner.  Her heart was still pounding.  He had known that she was more than she seemed, and that could be dangerous for both of them.

When he had spoken to her she thought her heart was going to stop.  She had never in her life felt that way with a male.

Her father’s words echoed in her mind.  She looked back at the door then back to her plate.

“Is it him?”  she asked.

“Yes,”  whispered her father.

Before she could stop herself, she was racing after him.  She heard the bartender and the man yell after her, but she did not even give them a passing glance.

When she finally made her way out of the diner’s doors Caspian was no where to be seen, but his demonic scent filled the air.  It called to her like nothing had ever before and she heeded its call.

Following her nose, she stalked through the crowded streets.  People seemed to move out of her way as she made her way out of the village.  She walked for what seemed like miles before she finally felt Caspian’s presence.

She stopped in her tracks and turned towards the forest.  She could feel his eyes on her as she stepped towards the silent trees.  His scent filled the crisp air filling her nostrils with its exotic flavor.

Throwing the pack towards one of the many trees that lined the road, she took a deep breath and pushed forward.  Forcing her shoulders back and her chin up, she walked through the forest with a sure step.

It was dark and the light was fading fast under the thick canopy as she continued forward.  The sounds of darklings slithering through the trees made her wary, but she knew that she could take one if she had to.

She continued forward until Caspian’s scent vanished.  She stopped and took another breath, but she could not distinguish his scent in the air. 

The trees groaned as they swayed and her heart beat jumped slightly with every sound they made.

Without so much as a sound, Caspian shot out of the trees.  He hit her with such force it knocked her back.  Her back hit the forest floor causing the breath to be knocked out of her.  She gasped just as Caspian’s body trapped her beneath him.


Caspian looked down at the female beneath him.  Her soft warm body called to him at such an elemental level that he wanted to stay like this for the rest of his life.

Her bright blue eyes stared up at him as her hair tumbled out of her pathetic looking hat.  It was the color of desire, of passion and it took his breath away.

Then before he knew what was happening, he was flying through the air.  He quickly turned and landed on his feet like any self respecting feline would.  He looked back at the female to see her pushing her self to her feet and dusting off her pants.

“That was totally uncalled for!”  she snapped.

The female’s eyes blazed with such fury that it made a shiver run up his spine.

“And throwing me through the air was not?”  he smirked at her.

He knew that if looks could kill, he would have been writhing on the floor at that moment.

“That would not have happened if your big ass had not tackled me!”  the female growled.

“Big ass?”  he laughed.

She sneered at him as she stalked forward.  The female was at least more than a foot shorter than himself, but she did not let that stop her.

“You are such a child,”  she snapped.

“You don’t know anything about me,” he snapped back. “So I would watch what you say to me, Woman.” 

“I know that you use your size to try to intimidate people and sorry to burst your egotistical bubble, but it does not work on me!”  the female growled.

He watched her, desperately trying to keep the smile that he was fighting off his face.  He could not remember ever feeling this invigorated in his entire life.

“Why did you follow me, Woman?”  he asked.

“The name is Julia, and don’t act like you did not want me to follow you,” the female exclaimed. “You did everything except roll out the red carpet for me.”  

He watched as Julia crossed her arms accidentally forcing her breasts higher and causing his heart to skip a beat.  His blood began to boil.  No one had ever spoken to him in such a way, except for his mother.

“What are you?”  he asked.

He was a bit nervous of her answer, but he had to know.  He had to know why he felt like this when he was close to her.

Julia flipped her hair over her shoulder as she puffed out her chest.

“I am your worst nightmare,” Julia sneered. “I am the creature that haunts your dreams at night.  I am the creature that makes you afraid to go to sleep.  I am the most powerful being that your pathetic mortal eyes will ever see.  I am an angel.” 

He stared at her for a moment before a laugh flew from his lips.  Then another and another, until one blended into the other.  His gut protested, but he could not stop himself.

“What’s so funny?”  Julia snapped.

“A little snip like you is my worse nightmare?” he mocked. “You can’t truly believe that.” 

He wiped a tear from his eye as he watched Julia.  Her eyes flashed in rage and confusion, but it did not frighten him.  It made him want to tease her more.  To bring out such fearsome emotion from the little female before him.

“I’ll show you,”  Julia whispered.

He watched as something amazing happened.  Julia’s eyes began to glow, the light shot out of her eyes in a demonic sort of way.  Her body began to shine as if a thousands suns came to life beneath her very skin.

A stream of light tore through her back and quickly formed into two perfectly shaped white wings.  Even her clothing began to change, turning from the ill fitting dirty rags, which had once covered her body, to fine white silk that hugged her body in layers.

He had never seen something so breath taking in his entire life.  She looked nothing like the woman that inhabited his world.  Where they were all tall, Julia maybe came up to his chest.  Where they had no shape, she had curves in places that he had only seen in his dreams.

He watched as Julia bowed up at him before she sneered,  “Now are you scared?  Do you wish you had rethought your words?”


Julia cursed herself for being so easily angered, but she could do nothing to help it now.  It must be her red hair like her sisters are always telling her,  but it was too late to second guess herself at that moment, the damage was done.

She was shocked when Caspian did not run at the sight of her.  He just stood there, staring at her as if she was a fine piece of art that was on display.

Then she saw something that in all her four hundred years of living she had never seen.  Caspian smiled and took a step towards her.  He did not scream, he did not cower, and he did not even shiver.  He just stood there with a stupid grin on his overly handsome face.

“No,”  Caspian whispered.

“What?”  she asked startled.

“You asked if I wished to of spoken to you differently and I answered no,”  he explained.

“Why?”  she asked truly confused by his answer.

“Then I would have never been able to see you like this.  The thing I don’t understand is why do you would hide?” Caspian asked. “Why do you cover up your beauty?” 

She stared at him, his words ran through her mind.  No one had ever called her beautiful before and his words touched her in the very depths of her immortal soul.

“Beauty?”  she whispered.

Her breath caught in her chest as Caspian’s eyes roamed down her body.  He studied her as if he was going to be tested on every freckle that marred her tan skin.  He did not miss one line, or one flaw as his eyes scanned over her.

“Has no one ever told you that fact?”  Caspian asked.

“No,” she whispered. “I am below average where I come from.  There are hundreds lovelier than I am.”  .

When Caspian did not say a word she looked up.  He stood before her, his face perplexed and riddled with unshed disgust.  She fidgeted under his intense stare, which seemed to break him from his thoughts.

“That is impossible,” cooed Caspian so sincerely that she almost believed him. “You have been beautiful since the day you took your first breath.” 

She watched as Caspian stepped towards her with no hesitation, but he did proceed with an awkward slowness as if she was a skittish filly.  When he was no less than two feet in front of her he stopped.

He towered over her five-ten frame, which was not that surprising because everyone on Ventra was freakishly tall.  Caspian made her feel dainty and feminine for the first time in her life.

“Why don’t you fear me?” she asked. “I don’t understand?” 

“Do you want me to fear you?”  Caspian asked in a soft cooing voice.

“No,”  she huffed.

She looked down to ashamed of herself to look him in the eye.  She sucked in a startled breath when his fingertips touched her cheek.  They were rough and callused, but they were so warm.

They trailed down her cheek, over her lips, and down to rest on her beat pulse, which was keeping the beat of the conga.

“Why should I fear someone just because they are different?” Caspian chirped. “I promise you that next to me, you look so normal you’re boring.” 


Caspian looked on as Julia’s shoulders began to shake, then when she could not hold it in any longer an almost silent laugh slipped from her lips.  That one giggle seemed to break the dam that was keeping her laugher at bay because all at once they began spilling out.

As he watched her he could feel a true smile tugging at the corner of his mouth, but instead of forcing it back like he would normally do, he let it form.

His heart swayed with the sound of Julia’s laugher, but it did not compare to when her joy filled eyes locked with his.  He thought his knees would buckle under his weight, but some way unknown to him, he continued to stand.

Her bright blue eyes stared through him, right to his very soul or at least what was left of his.  He wanted to reach out and drag her to him, but he pushed down the impulse.

He did not understand why he was so affected by this woman, this angel, but it did not scare him.  He knew that the woman before him was someone that would change his life.  The problem was, was it for the good or for the bad.

“Mate!”  growled his tiger.

It took all his self control to keep his tiger in check.  Its outburst had surprised him and had all most burst free.  He could feel it rubbing against his belly racking its claws with every touch.  It wanted to come out and it shocked him how much he wanted to release his control.

He wanted to loosen the reigns on his beast, to let it rule his actions a little.  He had never felt that way before, but as his tiger stated, Julia was his mate.  She was the one woman that was truly his and no one else’s.

He took a deep breath drawing his mate’s scent deep into his lungs.  Her aroma filled his senses like a drug.  It over powered him, made him weaker than he ever was, but at the same time, more powerful than he ever hoped to be.

“Thank you for that,”  Julia giggled.

He watched as she wiped a tear from her eyes before she looked fully at him.  Her bright blue eyes were like the sea, open and never ending.  A person could stare at those eyes forever and never find the end.  They could even get lost if they were not careful.

“You’re so different from others I have met,” his mate expressed. “You are such a breath of fresh air.  I have no idea why you don’t shy away from me and at the moment, I really do not care.  You have no idea what it feels like to be feared by all that looks upon you.  To have people run from you not for whom you are, but for what you are.” 

“I might know that feeling even better than you, Julia,”  he thought.

“I’m glad I can be useful for something,”  he answered aloud.

A smile spread across his mate’s face and it broke his heart.  For something so beautiful to feel so alone was not right.  He knew why people might fear her, but just one look should have been enough to quell their fears.

As he pushed a strand of his overly thick hair out from in front of his face he noticed how dark it was getting.  He could hear the darklings slowly moving through the forest as if drawn to Julia by her power and her light. 

He did not fear them, but he could not let them harm his mate.  They were still beasts and were still unpredictable.  He looked back down at Julia to see her looking up at him, her eyes filled with confusion.

“We need to get moving,”  he stated.

Without waiting for her answer he lightly grabbed her arm and tugged her after him.  He moved through the forest with ease, but his mate did not come without a fight.

“What?” Julia asked. “Why?” 

His mate tugged her hand, but he did not release her.  He knew that if she truly wanted to get free she could of with no problem, but she refused to use her true strength.

“It is not safe for you here,” he explained. “I must get you to a safer location.” 

He could feel Julia tense and he finally looked back at her.  He stopped under a huge tree, whose branches were as thick as a full grown man.   

His mate’s eyes were trained on their surroundings.  They watched every movement, she heard every sound, and he knew she could feel the darklings following them.

“You need to change back,” he whispered softly. “They seem to be drawn by the strange energy that you are amending.” 

He did not have to ask her twice.  Before he had finished his mate’s body had began to glow.  He watched as she quickly changed back into the form that he had first seen her in, but luckily she had not donned that ugly hat.

With a smile he turned and started walking through the forest.  The darklings continued to follow them, but less congregated around them this time.  He knew that if he had to, he would protect his mate from the creatures that have protected him all his life.


Julia swallowed a cry as a darkling bumped softly against her leg before darting back into the growing darkness.  Before she noticed what she was doing she tightened her grip on Caspian’s hand.  Suddenly her unease disappeared as if it had not been there to begin with.

In the back of her mind though, it replayed the story of an angel who had been caught by a pack of Concuns.  Those darklings had torn that angel apart, but it was only a story.  But even if that was true, she did not want to test her theory.

She looked ahead to see Caspian’s large back filling her view.  He lead her through the darkness with such ease that she could not bring herself to truly be afraid.

As they walked, she slowly started to notice how the darklings acted around him.  They moved out of his path without any coxing from Caspian.  They acted as if he was their alpha, their leader, and by the way he carried himself Caspian seemed to believe it as well.

He did not seem to fear these creatures at all.  He appeared to be calm and collected even as they rubbed up against him.  And as she watched she began to believe that maybe, he was their alpha.

“Where are we going?”  she whispered.

“Some place safe,”  Caspian grunted under his breath.

“No, duh, stupid!” she said sarcastically. “But where are we going?  Does this “safe place” have a name?” 

When he did not answer her she did the only thing she could think of.  She locked her legs.  Caspian was quickly jerked to a stop and she refused to budge until she got her answer.

“I am not moving another inch until you get off your high horse and tell me where you are taking me,”  she reported.

Now that he was facing her she lightly snatched her hand out of his and glared up at him.  Caspian looked down at her, his face blank of any emotion, but she knew that he was a tad bit pissed at her.

“I am taking you to the safest place I know,” Caspian answered. “I am taking you to my home, we should be safe there.” 

His voice never wavered when he spoke, but for some reason she knew that he was a bit scared to bring her there.  As if he was scared that she would not be safe there.

Her heart bled from him.  She wanted to wrap him in her arms and tell him every thing was going to be alright.  She looked into his eyes and for a moment did not see the strong demon that stood before her, but a child that had been hurt and needed someone to love him again.

She pulled her eyes away from his and painted a smile so false, it even felt wrong.

“Well then we better get moving,” she chirped. “The house is not going to come to us and my feet are killing me.” 

She started forward with no Earthly idea where she was going, but she knew that Caspian would not let her stray far.  Before she was even a yard ahead of him Caspian latched his hand around her’s and passed her.

With a smile she happily fell into step behind him, letting him lead her to safety.


Please comment any advice would help.

Chapter 3 coming soon.

Random Response

Broken Promises

Chapter 1





Fifteen Years Later

            Caspian groaned as he straightened from his crouched position.  His thick blood red hair stuck to his cheeks and jaw before he pushed it back into the make sift braid he had done that morning to control the curling mess.

 The hot sun was finally hanging low in the sky as a new sheen of sweat dotted his brow.  A light breeze carried his mother’s scent to him causing him to turn back to the house.

 He brushed the dirt from his hands as he watched his mother walk towards him.  Her long brown hair laid straight tumbling down her back to her hips.

            He smiled as he watched her jump over the dirt piles that held their crops for this season.  Holding her dress up, his mother quickly made her way over to him without so much as a stumble.

            “What’s the matter, Mother?”  he asked.

            She brushed an imaginary wrinkle from her dress before she looked up at him.

“I need you to go to town for me.”  his mother answered.

He looked at her wide eyed.

“Go to town?” he asked. “Why?  You have never allowed me to go for you before?” 

His mother smiled and turned away from him for a second before turning back to look him in the eye.

Her beautiful green eyes, the very same as his own, looked up at him.

“You were a little boy then, my son.  Nevertheless, you are no longer a my baby boy.” his mother explained. “You are a grown man, and I should treat you as such.” 

“But what about the villagers?” he asked. “They only tolerate me because of you.” 

“Like I said, you are a grown man now,” his mother continued.  “I cannot  shelter you any longer.  You must face the world one step at a time and stop hiding in my shadow.  It is your time to shine, and I will not be the one to hold you back.” 

He stared at her for a moment before a smile formed on his lips.  He shook his head and gently ran his fingers through his long thick hair.

“You’re right,”  he huffed.

“Haven’t you figured it out by now?  I am always right,”  his mother said smugly.

“Yes, Mother,”  he laughed.

Wrapping his arm around her waist, he hauled her up and hugged her.

“I love you, Mother,”  he laughed.

He set her down beside him and began heading to the house leaving her standing there alone.

“I love you more than you can possibly know,”  his mother whispered.


Maya watched as her son, her only joy in this God forsaken world, rode away.  She knew that this was most likely the last time she would ever see him again, so she stood there and stared after him.

The vision she had seen so many years before was slowly coming true.  Her heart pounded as her death replayed in her mind the hundredth time.  She took a deep breath taking Caspian’s scent into her lungs for the last time.

When he was out of view, she slowly gathered her long skirt and headed for the house.  She climbed the creaky steps and walked into through the front door.  She ran her hand over every crevice and every surface until they were etched into her mind.

She stepped into the kitchen and looked at the table, the one, that Caspian and herself had eaten at that very morning.  Flour sat on it as clear as day so she grabbed it up and set it on the counter.  She ran her fingers over its package then quickly pushed it aside.

She looked outside.  The sky was already fading into a sunset.  She did not have much longer.  She could already hear the darklings moving through the trees as the sun began it sink behind the trees.

“I’m sorry, Caspian.” she whispered. “One day you will forgive me.” 

The sound of heavy footed catsumys, demonic animals that could be domesticated, filled the room.  Their grunts and snarls brought her out of her train of thought.  She turned towards the door, where the noise was emanating from, and stood her ground.

A loud groan followed by boots hitting the hard dirt in front of the house filled her ears.  The stairs creaked as at least four people climbed them.

Her front door slammed open snapping from its hinges and crashing to the ground.  The four men did not even seem to notice it.  They just stepped into her home, as if they had that very right.

Her lynx, her other soul, wanted to snap out at the intruders, but she held it back.

She could tell by their scent that they were all demons, but the scent which made her heart skip a beat came for the fifth demon who walked through her door.

He was tall and strong.  His muscles roped his entire body making him the largest of the bunch.  His short red curly hair clung to his head and his deep violet eyes stared right through her.

He walked past the others and yanked out one of the table’s chairs.  Turning it, he sat roughly making the legs groan under his weight.  He grabbed a piece of fruit from the center piece and leaned back propping his mud incrusted boots on her table.

Without saying a word he bit into the fruit.  Its juice ran from his mouth down his fingers and chin.

Her lynx snapped at the demon and wanted to strike out at him for entering her territory, but she kept it back once more.

“Why have you come?”  she snapped.

The man looked up at her and wiped the juice from his chin with the back of his hand.  Smiling he tossed the fruit over his shoulder letting it drop to the floor. 

“Don’t be like that, Maya.”  the man cooed.

“We made a deal, Seth!” she snapped. “I would let you have me once, and you would leave me and this village alone.  Why have you broken your word?  Is nothing sacred to you anymore?” 

Seth watched her in silence then he pushed out of his chair to tower over her.  She straightened her back stretching to her full six foot height, but even with that he was at least a foot taller.

“Do you really think I could stay away from you?”  Seth asked.


“You have been able to stay away from me for fifteen years it must not be that difficult.”  she growled.

Seth’s jaw ticked then without thought his hand darted out taking her right above her elbow.  His claws dug into the skin as he jerked her to him.

Before she could stop herself a small whimper slipped from her lips.  Her lynx demanded to be released and racked its claws against her belly, but she ignored it.

“Did I hurt you?” Seth asked with a laugh lased through his gravely voice. “I’m so sorry baby.” 

As he spoke his claws dug deeper into her arm, but this time she controlled her reaction.  She stood there unwavering as Seth scowled down at her.

“You are mine, Maya,” Seth purred. “I was your first and I will be your last.” 

“Kill!”  snarled her lynx.

“If I had any feeling for you at all Seth they died years ago.  I do not love you,” she growled. “I have never loved you.  You are death and that is all you will ever be.” 

Seth stared at her then slammed her into the counter.  He pressed his body to her’s and crushed his mouth over her own.  She gagged at the vile taste of his mouth on her’s, of his tongue sweeping across her's.

Thinking fast she snapped her teeth together biting his tongue.  Seth howled and pulled back.  She could taste his blood in her mouth, but she did not mind it.  The look on Seth’s face made up for the metallic taste.

Her lynx purred at the sight of her enemy’s blood.  It even reveled in the taste of it.

“You are a fool,” Seth growled. “You should be overjoyed that I want you as my mate.” 

“I am not one of your parlor girls, Seth.  I will never be your mate,” she whispered. “I will never be yours.” 

Seth growled and slammed her harder into the counter.

Her lynx struck out again, but she pushed it back.  It snarled at her and paced back and forth just below her skin.

“Boss?”  one of the other demons asked.

Seth ignored the demon as he glared down at her.  Seth never took his eyes off of her’s.  It was if he wanted her to look away, he wanted to prove to her that he was the more dominate and had power over her.  However, she did not look away; her lynx would not allow her to do such a thing.

She glared at Seth and even pulled back her lips showing her petite, but sharp fangs.

“Boss?”  the demon asked louder.

“What?”  Seth snapped.

He did not turn to look at the other demon.

“It looks like the woman does not live here alone.”  the demon continued.

Her heart skipped a beat as Seth’s head snapped around to meet the demon.  The demon was not much older than Caspian, but his eyes told that he had seen more death and destruction than she would ever know.

He stood there holding up a pair of Caspian’s pants.  Seth’s claws surged deeper into her arms drawing her eyes back to his.  Instead of the violet eyes that had once looked at her, his eyes had bled into red and were locked right on her.

“How dare you?!” Seth growled. “You are mine!  You are my mate!” 

Before she could react, he threw her across the room.  She landed on her back on top of the table.  The blow knocked the wind out of her, so she laid there, her mouth open like a fish as she tried to suck in some air.

When she could  take a breath Seth was already on top of her.  His weight pinned her to the table preventing her from moving.

“Stop!”  she screamed.

She tried to push him off of her, but he held her firm.

“Shut up!”  snapped Seth.

His fist crashed into the side of her head.  It snapped to the side smashing into the table top.  She could not see or move, so she laid there.

She could feel Seth tearing at her clothes ripping them from her body. 

“You are mine!”  Seth snapped as he jerked her skirt up.

The thing that was keeping her still snapped and her lynx took control.  With a scream, they reared up.  Their claws dug into Seth’s face as their fangs' locked in the meat of his neck.

Seth jerked back crying out, but they refused to let go.  Their claws tore through his face cutting it into blood ribbons as their fangs' bit down working towards his jugular.

Before they could get her fangs any deeper three pair of hands grabbed them and ripped her off of Seth.  They forced them back onto her back.

Snarling her lynx pulled back, but the damage was already done.  Her own eyes were filled with blood lust, as she stared up at her bleeding prey.

 Seth stared down at her, blood running down his face and neck.  His once handsome face was gone, replaced with open gashes that would scar.

“Kill,”  snapped her lynx.

“You will pay for that!”  Seth snapped.

She watched as his claws lengthened.

“You will be mine or no one's at all!”  Seth yowled.

Her heart skipped a beat as Seth’s arm raised above his head.

“I’m so sorry, Caspian,”  she whispered to herself. “ I love you.” 

“Die!”  Seth screamed.

His claws slammed down racking across her throat.

“Pain!”  screamed her lynx.


Caspian flicked the reigns asking the old catsumy to move forward.  It was dark now, darklings littered the road, but he did not fear them.

Since he was a small child, they had protected him, as if he was one of their own, as if he was their alpha, their master.  The darlings were always near him when they could, and he respected them as they appeared to respect him.

The darkling slinked out of the way of the buggy allowing it through.  They then followed closely behind, grunting and growling as they moved along.

“Easy, boy,”  he cooed.

The old catsumy flicked its ear back at him.  Its huge yak-like body swayed back and forth as it continued forward.

“You can tell me easy all you want Boy, it won’t do you any good,” huffed the catsumy. “Darklings are nasty buggers and I can be nervous if I want to be.” 

“Don’t be like that, Brutus,” he whined. “They are not even looking at you.” 

“I can be anyway I want, boy,”  Brutus huffed.

Smiling he straightened and sagged his head back.  The stars were so bright in the night sky that it almost burned his eyes.  He closed his eyes and settled into a sleepy sort of daze. 

He did not know how long he was like this, but it had to of been at least ten minutes.  Suddenly, the buggy jerked to a stop bring him out of his daze as quickly as he went into  it.

He looked down to see Brutus lying crumbled on the ground.

“Brutus?!” he cried.

He jumped from the buggy and scrambled over to Brutus.

“Maya,”  Brutus wheezed.

His heart stopped when his mother’s name passed through Brutus’s lips.  Catsumy’s were connected to their claimer, if one dies the other dies as well, that was the risk of claiming.

“What’s wrong Brutus?” he asked. “What’s happening to my mother?” 

“Go to her,”  Brutus breathed.

“What?”  he asked.

“Go to her,” Brutus huffed. “She does not have long.  I will keep her heart beating for as long as I can.” 

He heard Brutus’s heart slowing and knew that once it stopped his mother’s life would be lost.

“Run!” Brutus screamed. “Go to her boy!  She needs you!” 

He scrambled to his feet; Brutus’s labored breathing fading with every step he made.  He ran as fast as his feet could carry him.  His animal screamed to be let out and without a second thought, he released his control.

He had never let his animal out before and did not know what might happen, but at that moment he did not care.  His body screamed as it formed for the first time. 

Fur shot out of his body, his fangs and claws lengthened as his hands turned slowly into huge paws.

He blinked and it felt like he was looking through water.  His animal roared as its tail twitched back and forth.  His heart pounded as he realized what type of demon he was.

He was a tiger.

His tiger sprang forth; its powerful legs ate up the distance quicker than he could ever hope of doing.  He could hear the darklings following close behind him, but his tiger refused to look back at them.

Their paws sank into the dirt as they forced themselves to move faster.  His tiger yowled as the smell of fresh blood filled the air. 

As his home came into view, they saw five men step from it.  They were all covered in blood, but one was more so than the others.

The scent of his mother’s blood filled the air causing his tiger to go mad with rage.  The demon with red hair turned and looked straight into his eyes. 

The demon froze and stood as still as ice as they skidded to a halt.  His tiger roared as they sized up their prey, but they did not strike.  They stood there, their tail twitching back and forth, and just stared at the demon.  His face had been torn to ribbons, skin only hanging on by a thread.

“What do we have here?”  asked the demon.

They just snarled at the demon, showing their fangs.

 They watched as the demon’s eyes widened.  They could feel the darklings behind him, but his tiger refused to take their eyes off of the demon.

“Boss!” yelled one of the other demons. “Come on!” 

“Calm yourself, Jeremy,” the demon hissed.  “We must stay calm.” 

As if knowing that he no longer needed his help, his tiger pulled back.  He stood there in his normal form snarling at the demon.

“You’re nothing, but a child,”  huffed the demon with a laugh.

“You’ll die,”  he snarled.

“Really?  What is my crime?” the demon laughed.  “And who in their right mind would send a child to do their dirty work?” 

“I came for no one, but myself,” he growled. “You attacked my mother.  Her blood stains you.” 

He could feel his blood lust forming, but he repressed it.  He could not let the other demon know how close he was.  His mother had always told him to hide all his weaknesses.

“Your mother?!” the demon asked breathlessly. “Maya?”  .

“You have no right to speak her name!”  he snapped.

He could feel his tiger rearing its head staying close to the surface in case he needed its help.

“She had a boy?”  the demon whispered.

He stepped forward and he felt the darklings moving with him.

“My son?”  the demon whispered.

Those words froze him in his tracks.  He could not believe his ears, but his eyes told him that the demon was speaking the truth. The demon before him looked so much like him that it would seem impossible that they were not related at least a little.

“Shut up!” he screamed. “You are not my father!  I have no father!  You are just the man who hurt my mother!” 

He lunged at the demon. 

“Stop!” roared his tiger. “Danger!” 

The darklings filed in around him, but they were pushed back.  He hit the ground with a smack, but was back on all four before he could even catch his breath.  The demon was surrounded by such power that he could not get close to him.

The darklings screamed and scurried back into the darkness.  Before him was the demon, which had his mother’s blood staining his fingertips, and he was unable to get to him.   The demon smiled and nodded at him once before jumping onto a catsumy.

He snarled, but stayed put.  He watched as the demon rode off into the darkness his men following close behind.

Through his blood lust, he heard a soft gasping breath.  Before he could stop himself his feet were already carrying him through the front door of his house.

Blood covered the walls, splattered this way and that painting the room with its foul scent.  Books that his mother had read to him as he grew laid scattered on the floor torn to pieces.  Chairs were splintered and thrown across the room, their mangled bodies sprawled for all to see, but what he saw first caused his heart to break.

His mother’s body lay broken on the kitchen table.  Her life blood dripped to the floor forming a crimson puddle in its wake.

He stifled a cry as he moved towards her.  A soft gasping breath lifted his mother feeble form.  He was at her side that very second looking down into her clouding eyes.

“Mother?”  he whispered.

“Caspian?”  his mother gasped.

“Oh my God!” he cried. “I am so sorry.  I should have been here!  I should have protected you!” 

With more strength than he thought possible she lifted her blood soaked hand and touched his cheek.

“Than you would be lying next to me,”  his mother huffed.

“You are still very young, my son,” she breathed. “You could not have stopped Seth, even if you had wanted to.” 

“I could have stopped him!”  he cried.

He took a hold of her hand and kissed it.  Her blood covered his lips, but he did not care.

“Seth is stronger than you, my son,” she gasped. “And he is your father.” 

“No, Mother, you are wrong,” he rumbled. “I have no father, I just have you!  So you can’t leave me.” 

“That is something that neither of us has any say in,” his mother stated. “If it is my time to leave this world nothing you, or I do will stop that.” 

“But Mother I….”  he cried.

“Shhh, my son,” she whispered. “It is alright.  You will be fine.  God will take care of you my son.  He will protect you more than I can.” 

He could hear his mother’s voice fading in strength.  He could hear the abating beat of his mother’s heart.

“Please Mother, don’t leave me!”  he cried.

He crawled onto the table and laid his head on her chest.  His mother’s blood seeped through his clothes and stuck to his skin.  Clinging to her, he finally let his tears fall. 

He clung to her for what felt like hours, listening to her heart slowing and her lungs growing weaker and weaker, but even though it all, she stroked his hair.  Her fingers treaded through his locks like they had when he was a young child.

She kept stroking him until she gave her last quivering breath and her hand fell silent.  He screamed as he wrapped his self around his mother’s body.  He knew that she was no longer there, but he could not bring himself  to let go.

He clung to her until her body began to cool.  Reluctantly, he pulled away from her.  Her blood covered his body soaking into his pores just like his hate.

His rage boiled from him.  He roared and his tiger roared with him.  Blood lust filled his senses as his father’s image came to his mind.

He turned to see two darklings hovering right outside the door.

“Find him!” he roared. “Find him and bring him to me!” 

The darklings whimpered and ran from the door their tails between their legs.


God looked down at the scene that had just transpierced.  The rage the young demon had expressed had made him, the all powerful sovereign of all things, quiver in fear.

He could even taste the hate the tiger demon was feeling all the way in his kingdom, which was billions of miles from where the demon knelt screaming.

He knew in the back of his mind that this demon would play an important part in Ventra’s history, but for some reason the future was cloudy to him.

In all his years, this cloudiness had never happened, and it made him uneasy.  He had to know what this demon would do.  Would he become his father’s child and kill in an act of wrath or would he be like his strong, but gentle mother?  He could not see and he had to know.

He turned and watched his children as they walked before him.  He knew all their names and all their weaknesses, but none of them knew his.

Well, none of his children except his four favorite daughters.  They sat at the foot of his throne their white wings glittering in the light, which was being emitted from their immortal souls.

He looked upon each one.  Each was so different from the other, but the same in so many ways.  One of them would have to go to Ventra, but which one.

Just then his daughter with hair the color of fire turned to him as if knowing that he was thinking of them.  She was his favorite among the four sisters, and he had more than one account looked over some actions that other angels would have been reprimanded on.

She was the gentlest of his daughters.  Kinder and more caring than any which had come before her.  Before he knew it his mind was made up this daughter would go.  

Julia would calm the demon’s soul.

 Chapter 2 coming soon

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Hope you like this I started to write this when I was in sixth grade.  Hope to get it published one day please tell me what you think about it.

Broken Promises

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            This tale takes place in a world that is not much different than our own.  People go on with their lives just like we do, but these people are different from us.  Because you see they are not truly human.  At least some of them are not. 

They are demons, but not the demons whom you think you know about.  These people, these demons do not come from hell and are no less evil than you or I.  They are just people who have special abilities.  They are people who have two souls trapped in the same body, though only one of these souls is human.  The other soul is an animal.  Because of them having more than one soul, they are able to change into that animal’s form if they so choose.  However, even though these demons are not born evil, many humans think they are.    

They shun them, as if they were the cause of all their problems, but you see that is not always the case.  Yes, some demons are evil just like some humans are immoral but most are just trying to get by in a world that looks down on them.    

Demons are people and in this story it will show you what happens when people accept that fact and when people do not.


Prologue




On The World Called Ventra
12:00 a.m.
         
          Lightning crashed through the trees, filling the night air with light and the smell of ozone.  Raging winds tore through the forest, whipping the trees back and forth in its fury.  Darklings, demonic animals that only showed their faces at night, lunged away from the lightning, screaming and yowling through the rain. 

            A small house stood alone, taking the full force of the storm.  It groaned under the onslaught, but it refused to buckle.  The darklings slithered towards the house in numbers that had not been seen in thousands of years. 

Thousands of these misunderstood creatures poured from the raging forest draw by a power that they, themselves did not understand. 

They crept and slinked until a few could peek through one of only three windows of the house.  Their glowing eyes stared through the window at the scene inside.

A woman’s scream filled the night, causing a darkling to cry out with her.  Darklings swayed back and forth with the rain as another scream pierced the night air.


Inside the woman screamed once more.  She whipped her head side to side as blood dribbled from her young demon body.

“Push, Maya!  Push, girl!”  yelled an older woman.

The older woman, with hair the color of freshly spun silver, crouched between Maya’s thighs.  She carefully wiped the blood away as Maya pushed.  With that push, her baby’s head crested, tearing her.  Maya screamed as the older woman gripped the baby’s head and began to gently pull it from her body.

“Reina I can’t push anymore!”  Maya screamed.

“Yes you can!” demanded Reina. “Now push!” 

Maya cried, her arms reaching out blindly searching for anything to hold onto.  Her hand hit a soft, warm hand and held on for dear life.  The young girl she held onto wiped the sweat from Maya’s brow as she pushed once more.

“Come on, Maya!”  Renia yelled. “Just once more!  Push once more!” 

Maya pushed with the last bit of energy she had left and her baby bust from her body.  She slumped back, her body finally giving up as she stared up at the ceiling.

Her baby’s cries split through her fogged mind, bringing her back to reality.  Maya turned her head to see Renia cradling her baby in her arms.

“It is a healthy baby boy, my lady,” cooed the young girl.

Maya looked at the young girl and slowly remembered that her name was Lily.  Lily did not look a day older than thirteen, but she stood beside Maya without an ounce of queasiness that normal girl her age would have shown.

  Maya sighed and tried to push herself  up, but she just did not have the strength.  Lily helped as much as she could, but she could only manage to pull Maya up to half way.

“Let me see him,”  Maya whispered.

Renia laid the baby in Maya’s arms, then stepped away.  Tears filled Maya’s eyes as she looked down at her newborn baby boy.  He looked up at her and smiled.

 Her baby's bright green eyes shone from his face.  Curly red hair covered his head, and she lightly scraped her finger nails through it.

“What will you call him, my lady?”  asked Lily.

Maya stared down at him.  He had old eyes, already filled with more wisdom than she could ever hope of receiving.

“I believe that I will call him Caspian,”  Maya whispered.

Caspian giggled as he smiled up at her.  Smiling, Maya kissed his soft little forehead.


Outside, lightning lit the night sky.  Darklings howled as they watched Maya and Caspian, their new and only master.

Chapter 1 in my next post.